Presentation plan at a meeting of startups

I propose creating a plan according to which we will present our startups at subsequent meetings. I offer here such an option.
1. Project description
• a brief overview of services
• what problem they solve on the market
• what users get
2. Monetization (how to earn / raise the value of the company)
• listing of monetization methods
3. Audience (who will be the main consumer of this project)
4. Competitors
• your competitors
• what is your competitive advantage over them
• do you have unfair competitive advantages
5. Team
• key members of the team and briefly on their experience
6. Finance
• what income at the moment
• how much has been achieved and at what rate grew
7. The need for investment
• how much is required for the development of the project - the total amount
• what services and how much money specifically for each service
• how long the investment will pay off